Don’t lose faith
Don’t give in---
I can’t go on--
The old familiar fear: not to lose him
I didn’t want to leave my father
Give me water
Help me go on--
Water was the worst poison for him, but what what else could I do,
It would soon be over anyway
I could see his lips trembling
I shall never forget the gratitude that shone in his eyes
He had called out to me but I had not answered
Perhaps he was still breathing
When they took him to the crematorium
I did not weep, and it pained me that I could not
Alex,
ReplyDeleteI thought your poems was very good. It showed so much emotion. I could feel the sadness that engulfed him when his father passed away. The line "I did not weep, and it pained me that I could not" really stuck out to me. Overall I find your poem to be very interesting.
Yeah I agree with Sage, the part where Elie was sad that he could not grieve for his father is definitely the most moving part of your poem and probably in the book Night. The fact that Elie could not cry for his father because he had seen so much death and sorrow is really hurts. I'm really glad you added that to your poem. It's hard to empathize what those people were going through in that time, but this piece leaves a the reader a step closer to understanding what happened and I like that.
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